Proposals by Devon@AI.MIT.Edu 2010-03-06 --- begin corrections --- > > Page 7 CAcert Assurer training > [false as written] > ... control the trustworthiness ... > control/verify > > commercial CA'?s > [modern usage is CAs for plural, some old usage might have been CA's > but never ever use a double apostrophe] > CA'?s/CAs > > Page 10 CAcert Assurer training > ... caveats in and risks ... > and/ > > Page 16 CAcert Assurer training > ... with what extent ... > with/to > > ... liable for there assurances ... > there/their > > ... hope to avoid at all. > [perhaps you mean to say "at all costs" or "altogether" but "at all" > sounds strange and out of place] > at all/entirely > > Page 23 CAcert Assurer training > ... accomplish you own ... > you/your > > Page 34 CAcert Assurer training > ... of the appearance ... > the/ > > ... tried to push back ... > [sounds like the Assurer attacked first - from security to combat - I > can only guess the meaning] > /throws away > > Page 39 CAcert Assurer training > ... pedantically ... > [no meaning nor grammar] > pedantically/difficult > > ... regulated ... > regulated/regular > > Page 42 CAcert Assurer training > ... If ... than ... > than/then > > ... it is possible that the Assurer asks ... > /the Assurer may ask > > ... reasonable borders ... > [sounds foreign but charming] > > Page 43 CAcert Assurer training > ... students, regular customers ... > , / or > > ... persons which are ... > which/who > > --- end corrections ---